But was he ever going to get all the way through the phases with Earth? I doubt that was ever in the cards... there has to be something recognizable as present-day Earth in the long term for the stories to work. Even with the massive destruction in AHM, Earth was still mostly intact. Without the familiar to ground things in, at least in one little corner of the story, Transformers loses something.
The criticism is that Furman never even showed a standard infiltration before blowing it all to hell. For all the talk about how important the stages are, Furman himself threw them out the window very casually.
The artificial status quo of Earth being largely intact and unchanged is a common problem to most comics. One of the few bright spots in the ongoing is that said status quo might be meaningfully changed. Any franchise loses far more in terms of credibility when the status quo is artificially maintained. (The more event driven the stories are, the more impact the events need to have to prevent the story from becoming completely pointless.)
He was rebuilding the universe from the ground up. And what is a plot except setting up the pieces (plot threads and characters) only to knock them down (resolve the plots in various ways)?
Furman was getting ready to knock them all down, in exactly the same way as he had before, before he even set them up.
And, there is a difference between recounting fictional events, (as Furman was doing), and saying something/anything.
So were Jhiaxus, Nova Prime and Grindcore, at least as much as we saw them. There's a good plot reason for them being the way they are. I wouldn't expect a character like Galvatron to be anything other than over-powered though... like Megatron and Prime, he's in the big leagues in terms of Transformers characters.
Grindcore showed up? Really? Darn. How the heck did Furman over-power an obscure movie repaint whose most notable trait is that he liked heavy metal music? (Wait, am I thinking of a different character?)
Galvatron was not just powerful, he was "little kid favorite" over-powered..with all of the wanky back-story one would expect. Galvatron is just so over-powered and kewl. Woweezowwee. Tributes to bad 90s comics need to be handled carefully, and in small doses. Unintentional tributes along these lines, (as Galvatron probably is), need to be avoided.
IDW Jhiaxus, Nova Prime and the rest of the Eye of Terror, (erm, uh, Dead Universe), crew were rip-offs of Games Workshop characters. (Yeah, Games Workshop shamelessly rips of mythology and history. But, they do so a bit more honestly, and with way the heck more class.)
And all of this doesn't really answer the question "What should he have done differently?" You've described what you see as his shortcomings, but how should he have done things differently? Apart from written with tighter editorial control. What should the editor have demanded of him?
Actually, I touched on it here....
I get the feeling he writes best with an active editor, (like Rob Tokar is known to have been), or with limited scope (as seen in "Spotlights" or various old UK stories).
Furman needs limits and focus. He needs to write stories of limited scope that provide less occasion for his worst excesses.
Again, I am not saying Furman is the worst writer. He is not as pretentious or self-indulgent as other writers I regularly mention. But, he is prone to aimless and noisy writing.
And is it really the editor's job to direct the creative output of the writer? I'm not sure that's what an editor actually does.
There are two types of editing. One is the basic editing for grammar. The other is editing for content. The first editor makes sure that basic rules are followed. The second asks if the the thing the rules are being applied to is even worth writing in the first place.
I have seen mechanically perfect papers that are terrible because the writer has nothing of interest to say about anything of importance.
There was a time when comic editors were heavily involved in content development, to say nothing of keeping stories cohesive and grammatically sound. Marvel even had a formalized, if not un-commonly circumvented, rule that a writer could not edit their own titles.
On a related note, am I the only one who notices that comics seem to have more errors now than they did even 10 years ago?
It wasn't just the war, there were threats from Skywatch, the Machination, the Reapers, and the Dead Universe Transformers. There wasn't a limiting and single-minded focus on the Autobot/Decepticon conflict to the exclusion of everything else.
There is nothing wrong with adding more characters/factions. The problem is that Furman was just doing the same thing with all of them...adding more toys to throw around and break. (Wow. Death Bring and company show up....prove they are bad ass....but not as bad ass as....._________, who is less bad ass than....._______, and so on....)
Unicron story over and over again and I think that's what Dom is irritated with. I think he'd like to see Furman write a story that says something more than just "OMG! Teh big bad is going to get us all!!"
Close. But, it is not just Unicron. Call him Shokoract. Call it....the Dead Universe. Call it.....the Anti-Monitor....call it...Superboy Prime....call it....
You get the idea.
Apparently, writing about big robots from another planet is not kewl enough. We have to have MORE COSMIC WANKERY at ever step.
Part of me wonders if this ties in with the resurgence in superstition and conspiracy theories that has gripped this country for the last 15 years. At first, some people were putting that sort of thing down to millenial lunacy. But, here we are...nearly a decade after the big calendar rolled over.....and it is still here.
The sort of writing Furman was doing is exactly the kind of thing Morrison was talking about in "Final Crisis". (This is not a defense of FC by the way. Morrison stating the obvious does nothing to solve the problem). If the world ends every week, who the hell cares? (This is expecially problematic with event-driven stories that have nothing to say beyond "look what is happening".)
Does anyone else here read "WarHammer" 40K stories? Consider the priority attached to the Emperor of Mankind. He has shown up, (to my knowledge), 4 times. There was a special edition gaming piece. He showed up in the old Inquisitor Draco novels, the "Eye of Terror" novel, and a recent short story "The Last Church". Granted, I am not a fan of the "Draco" novels. But, all of those stories can stand on something beyond "hey look, G*D shows up in this story". (And, yes, "G*D" properly indicates the importance of the Emperor in "WarHammer".) Part of the Emperor's value is the fact he is useful in those stories. But, part of it is that the Emperor of Mankind does not show up every year. (I have been a WH fan for 10+ years, and can only think of 4 appearances, counting a game piece.) For a while, I did not even think the Emperor existed in context for WH.
I cannot think of a single appearance of Khorne, Nurgle, Slanesh or Tzeentch. Gork and Mork show up in the game, but their importance is minimal.
Dom
-"Throne of Earth!" has more weight than "By Primus!".....